jeudi 21 avril 2016


It all started like this.

This is my story I will guide you with multiple choice and try to abolish all the false information you can have about my formation youth and adult correctional. I hope you will have the pleasure to read it as much that I have to write it. to begin with I will give you three choices, the first one, I work in a prison, the second one work with homeless people and the third one, work with prostitutes. I can guaranty that you will feel my drive for the work. Choice 1: I am prison officer. Choice 2: I work with the homeless people. Choice 3: I help prostitutes.































Scene 1.

I have a foot in the door on my new job, I'm happy I start as a new agent at Riviere des prairies, I take the job because there's a vacant position for a guy who retiring. So the day starts without too much noise everything is ok. Out of nowhere there's a fight that broke out. Three more choices are given to you. Choice 1: someone stabs me with a craft knife. Choice 2:the guardians regain control of the situation.































Scene 2.

I work with homeless people on the street, everything is going well, I am new at this job so I learn the ropes, and there's a lack of support from the government so it's not always that easy to we work with limited resources. so I'm the trainee of the day and I like what I learn, it's inestimable. Choice 1: someone who is very intoxicated attack me. Choice 2: I saw an altercation between a homeless guy and a pedestrian going on.































Scene 3.

I found a new job in the street in downtown to help girls that have problems with prostitution. Give condom, to help and educated the girl to stay healthy and if possible away from alcohol and dope. I'm not naive, but it's my job to warn them. Choice 1: One of the girls told me that she was a victim of sexual harassment. Choice 2: I Help one of the girls who do prostitution to go out on the street.































Scene 4.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 5.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 6.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 7 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 8































Scene 7.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 8.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 9.

I arrive at the hospital, there are a lot of ins and outs, they urgently take me to the operating room. Everything happens for the best. I emerged with a slight injury and a few stitches. I hope that i will return to my job soon. I was scared a lot, but I will not give up!































Scene 10.

The guardians with a few bruises take the control of the situation, but I have to meet a guy named Bob, who start the fight and I have to do overtime to try to understand what happen and speak with Bob to help him understand why he start this fight. He told me that someone stole his marijuana and he was pissed off. I finish late but i learn i lot from this experience.































Scene 11.

It's not very easy in the street to have a good time management, anyway, I try to help a homeless guy because he have problem to attach is shoes, so out of nowhere and for absolutely no reason he attacks me, fortunately I have a course of protection in college and I'm able to defend myself and finally calm the guy down and I explain to him that all that I want its help him out with is shoes. What I learn from this experience is to be more careful, we never know what can happen in the street.































Scene 12.

I walk on the street when I saw a homeless guy and I pedestrian came to a fight, I try to separate them and try to understand what is happening. The pedestrian told me that he does not want to give money to anyone. I told him that is not an obligation, and I ask him to continue his way down the street. After that I told the homeless guy to calm down and I will go to couche tard to buy him some. food.































Scene 13.

One of the girls told me that she was a victim of sexual harassment. I know the guy responsible because it's often him that harass the girl where I work, so I told her that I will call the cops, but she told me that they will not do a thing for her because of her status. I call the cop anyway because the guy must be stopped, with the help of the other girls, they give a good portrayal of the guy and maybe with a little luck the cops will find the guy. The girl who is the victim of the sexual harassment was ok and I swear that one day she will go out of the street.































Scene 14.

There's one of the girls that I have faith in her because she loves music and every instrument she try, she can play by ears. she as a natural talent and I want her from the start to go at a music school. But in the past, she didn't want to play music, she thinks that I am crazy and she doesn't think that she is so good. But one day getting older she is so tired and she wants to go out on the street. I help her to reach some of the programs of drugs, confidence in herself and other one. Maybe One I will see her play music somewhere. I'm so proud of her.































Scene 15.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 16.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 17 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 20































Scene 17.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 18 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 19































Scene 18.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 19.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 20.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 21 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 22































Scene 21.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 22.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































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Scene 23.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 24 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 31 Choice 3: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 38































Scene 24.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 25 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 28































Scene 25.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 26 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 27































Scene 26.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 27.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 28.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 29 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 30































Scene 29.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 30.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 31.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 32 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 35































Scene 32.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 33 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 34































Scene 33.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 34.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 35.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 36 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 37































Scene 36.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 37.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 38.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 39 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 42































Scene 39.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 40 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 41































Scene 40.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 41.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 42.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 43 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 44































Scene 43.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 44.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































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Scene 45.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 46 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 53 Choice 3: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 60































Scene 46.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 47 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 50































Scene 47.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 48 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 49































Scene 48.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 49.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 50.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 51 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 52































Scene 51.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 52.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 53.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 54 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 57































Scene 54.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 55 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 56































Scene 55.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 56.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 57.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 58 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 59































Scene 58.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 59.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 60.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 61 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 64































Scene 61.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 62 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 63































Scene 62.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 63.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 64.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was and then develop the story some more. After reading this part, your reader will have to make another choice. Choice 1: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 65 Choice 2: Write a choice that will take the reader to Scene 66































Scene 65.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































Scene 66.

You decided something which brought you here. Briefly say what the choice was, provide closure, and end the story. Start again: Write a sentence that will take the reader to the beginning again.































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Hypertext narrative template for digital ESL literacy
This hypertext narrative fiction template was developed by Bokomaru Publications and checked for common ESL grammar errors using an online ESL grammar checker and checked for field-related vocabulary using an b-block ESL vocabulary checker. Last modified: Thursday, 22 October 2015, 10:23 AM

samedi 19 mars 2016

Summary

Being an criminologist is a very interesting and rewarding profession. Being an criminologist is studying human behavior. You had to have very high skills to do this job. We must help the criminals to be reintegrated into society. It must also take samples from some people in society and study its deviations. Criminologist can be found on the crimes scenes to try to understand what  happened. What's good is that there is opportunity for advancement or you work. It is also possible to appreciate the joys of having a job that is not at all routine. We must undertake rigorous studies to end up being a criminologist, most is studying psychology and sociology to achieve it. Also employer search people that are responsible, logical and creative, you have to adapt to any situation. Criminology is a modern science that deals with inappropriate behavior.


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Glossery


Prison
A building in which people are legally held as a punishment for a crime they have committed or while awaiting trial.
Delinquent
tending to commit crime, particularly minor crime:delinquent teenagers.
Correctional
Relating to the punishment of criminals in a way intended to rectify their behaviour.
Behavior
The way in which one acts or conducts oneself, especially towards others.
Drugs
A medicine or other substance which has a physiological effect when ingested or otherwise introduced into the body.
Problem
A matter or situation regarded as unwelcome or harmful and needing to be dealt with and overcome.

Jail
         A place for the confinement of people accused or convicted of a crime.
Liberty
        The state of being free within society from oppressive restrictions imposed by authority on one’s behaviour or         political views.
Detention
The action of detaining someone or the state of being detained in official custody.
Youth center
A place or organisation providing leisure activities for young people.

Agent
A person or thing that acts or has the power act

authority
A person or organisation having power or control in a particular, typically political or administrative sphere.
Cell
A small room in wich a prisoner is locked up

burglary
Illegal entry into a building for the purposes of commiting an offence, such as theft

Courtesy
Showing of politeness in one's attitude and behavior toward others

Criminality
A criminal actor practice

Crisis
A dramatic emotional or circumstantial upheaval in a person's life

Dept
An amount of money barrowed by one party from another

Detention
The act of detaining or state of being detained

Frame
To make a person appear as the perpetrator of a crime that he/she not commit







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mercredi 24 février 2016


http://dependancemontreal.ca/

This website http://dependancemontreal.ca/ can help to deal with addictive problems like drugs, alcohol, gambling and others. I will show you how to use this site an maybe it will help somme people with that kind of problems. This is in the part of my program youth and adult correctional!

How to use the dependancemontreal.ca to help you with addictive problems

In this video, I will do a walkthrough demonstrating how to help you with dependance problems on dependancemontreal.ca.




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mardi 9 février 2016

Three Reasons why i Choose to Help People in Life


By Jeangagnon (Own work) [CC BY-SA 3.0 (http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0)], via Wikimedia Commons
This is the story of why I want to help people and I choose youth and adult correctional intervention in college. I will give you 3 reasons of why I want to help people who have addictive problems. I have a really hard life and learn the hard way that life is not always easy. you will understand in this listicle exactly why I chose this program and why I want to help people out.

A lot of people needs help 

The three reasons that led me to do a helping profession. First, I had already needed help with problems of addictions and I was happy that services exist to help me when I need it, secondly, people naturally come to me for help, and it's always a pleasure for me to help and finally, helping people for me is natural. There is a place where I have been helped in the past and I would like to work for them later. http://dependancemontreal.ca/ Dollars Cormier not too far from College Ahuntsic, They help people, they have all kinds of services and they can help anyone with addictive problems.

2. People naturelly come to me when they need help

Since I was young, people entrusted me naturally. I have helped many people in need by simply speaking to them. I've always liked helping and listened to people who have problems to find solutions. This is what led me in the youth and adult correctional program. That way I will use my skill to help people Who Suffer from bad things that happens in their life and people who suffer of addictive problems. Gambling, drugs, alcohol and in the future people that are addict to technology, I will help them all.

3. A lot of people have addictive problem

Many people need help because they have drug problems, alcohol problems, gambling problems and some may be addict with the technology, cell (Facebook, cell and tweeting to name a few). How many people have been ruined in casino because they all spend their money wrongly, how many people shoot themselves on heroin? how many people do crack? I want to help and I Hope that I will be good at doing that. Too many people suffer and need help.

To conclude

To conclude, I want to help people with addiction problems, have been there before and I understand to be addicted to drugs or alcohol. People came naturally to me in life and they want me to help them so I decide to do something in life that will give me the correct tools  to help people who suffer or have addictive problems. Many people have found themselves in the street with mental illness because of the deinstitutionalization and I want to help homeless people too. So with my course youth and adult correctional, my first goal is to help people who had addictictive problems, but they're so many other things I can do.
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jeudi 28 janvier 2016

My name is Frederic Girard and my goal in life is to help people who had hardtime in there life. I want to help people with addictive problem. Life is not an easy thing for everybody and some people suffer from addcition of drugs, alcohol, gambling and now people can be addict to internet, facbeook, twitter and for some other videogame. All kind of people need help and i want to be there for some of them.